Today, we are looking through work from other students writings that are in the 5th grade. I was really impressed with how much you can learn from other students even if they are younger than me! Some of these students are very have alot of good ideas about writing and ways to improve your writing. One of the tips that really astonished me was one from Lacey that said, "try to leave the reader hanging and wondering what will come next when he or she is reading your post." I think that that is a really good tip and i really does help people to have a much better understanding of what the writer is trying to say.