I read a wonderful post by paulina at JH House. When I read the post from Paulina I would have never known that she was just an elementary student. "Put quotes from other people in your posts. That will make your writing have other voices in it". I thought that this was a good line and I wanted to quote it, so that any one reading my post will be able to hear Paulina's voice coming out in my post. I think that she is totally correct when she says that using the same dull words over and over loses its affect in the post. If you use different words it will keep the interest of the person reading it. I think that Paulina is wise byond her age. Great job!!!
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